Business Letter Example

Business letter example.

Thank you for your presentation. To be honest, it was not what I expected. Talking about a product, it is alright. Invention’s idea is good. It is something new and interesting.

Let’s start with presentation. It was failure. It has not been a smooth development. You are talked without a plan. No introduction, no conclusion, less information about invention and your points. So, you did not sold a product, like presentator.

Let’s talk just about invention. How I understood, main point is to wake up with beach and go to sleep with planetarium. It is like a monitor. I like your idea. It is great. BUT, how it should work?